Overall, this is a good policy brief and I believe with a few changes it can be


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Overall, this is a good policy brief and I believe with a few changes it can be great. You refer to it as a “paper”, but in actuality, it is a policy brief. You are trying to show the importance and relevance of your topic to a group of policy makers. It lacks statistical data to drive home the point you are trying to make. You start out discussing adolescents in your executive summary, and somehow you moved to people overall. You discuss on page 3 that human beings have four major challenges to their mental health, but should it be that adolescents have challenges to their mental health or adults? And, in your “Mental Health and Social Media” subtitle, page 5, you discuss “people” again. Who are these “people”? Is your “Recommendation” for youth with mental health disorders, or overall mental health disorders in everyone? I hope that you can understand what I’m saying here. Hopefully, you will meet with me on Wednesday to get a better direction in your paper.

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